I liked how things were simultanously not-real and real, how Rodney sees this only happening in a dream, how they fall into each other and then fall out, almost as gracefully at the end.
John's lips were dry, his eyes closed, palm coming up to cup Rodney's jaw. It was as slow and languorous as the past few days, like lying beside that lake listening to the water gently lapping against the shore.
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Date: 2005-10-19 09:35 pm (UTC)I liked how things were simultanously not-real and real, how Rodney sees this only happening in a dream, how they fall into each other and then fall out, almost as gracefully at the end.
John's lips were dry, his eyes closed, palm coming up to cup Rodney's jaw. It was as slow and languorous as the past few days, like lying beside that lake listening to the water gently lapping against the shore.
Lovely.